The day things started disapearing

This is my other narrative. writing test I hope you really like my make up stories I like some feedback.

The day things started disappearing

joseph had black hair brown eyes and he was 13 years old and he was smart and brave and tall and his friend desmond had black hair blue eyes and short and he was really funny and he was really not that brave but he can stand up for his mate if they are getting bully and he 11 years old.

  

“Ahhhhh why are everything is disappearing” said joseph Then his friend desmond came along and said “why are my toy are disappearing I wonder you where it going” then joseph said lets go and see why are things are disappearing then they went and see the next door and said have you gags see anything disappearing yes my cooking pad is missing and they went by house and they all missing and it was night then they went back home then they tucked himself  into bed.

Then the next he same thing happen again then joseph said “why is this happening everyday” said joseph then his friend desmond said I don’t know what happen that thing are disappearing all the the time” said desmond then joseph said let go and see what is making thing disappear

then they were looking everywhere to see what is making the staff disappear they went in the forest they saw nothing at all then they thought to them self what is happening then they went and look in the woods then they saw all their staff in a big tree house.

They saw a poor old man they went and look up in the tree and said to the old “way are you take our staff from our house” they both said to the man then the said because I have no cloths no where to live and this is the only place I can live in that why Im take them from houses then joseph said come with us and we will give you some food” said joseph then they all went and take the old man to there house and they said to there mum can we give some food to this poor old man.

Elijah